tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1334012987814845137.post8157907660717774290..comments2023-03-03T00:41:27.703-08:00Comments on PERFECT NONSENSE: Another poem from back in the dayKavita (luvikavi)http://www.blogger.com/profile/17521928648636618645noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1334012987814845137.post-3737828324088696462008-09-08T04:14:00.000-07:002008-09-08T04:14:00.000-07:00I read your peotries... but it seems you have a co...I read your peotries... but it seems you have a conversational style of writing. I mean you could get more creative... no hard feelings!!<BR/><BR/>For example - you could put in some feeelings in your poetry. Than writing them so literally.<BR/><BR/>I yelled at my mom cause, she said I wasn't serious,<BR/>Later I realized that she cared and was absolutely right.<BR/>I yelled at my sister cause, Sanjay Chhabriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13168874848189932459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1334012987814845137.post-28456568140086362712008-09-08T04:12:00.000-07:002008-09-08T04:12:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Sanjay Chhabriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13168874848189932459noreply@blogger.com