Yelling
I yelled at my mom
Cuz she said I wasn't serouis
I yelled at my sister
Cuz she wrote on my homework
I yelled at my brother
Cuz he drove his remote control car
Right into my foot!
I yelled at the weatherman
Cuz he said it would snow
I yelled at my friend
Cuz she wasn't being honest
I yelled at my self
Cuz I yelled at everyone else
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I read your peotries... but it seems you have a conversational style of writing. I mean you could get more creative... no hard feelings!!
For example - you could put in some feeelings in your poetry. Than writing them so literally.
I yelled at my mom cause, she said I wasn't serious,
Later I realized that she cared and was absolutely right.
I yelled at my sister cause, she wrote on my homework
Her scribbling read – I love you, and would miss you after you leave to NY in tomorrow’s flight.
I yelled at my brother because he drove his remote control car, Right into my foot!
His intention was to save me from stepping on the broken glass pieces.
I yelled at the weatherman because he said it would snow
Though it did not snow, staying back at home helped me cure my cold.
I yelled at my friend cause, she wasn't being honest
As she said 'she hated me and didn’t want to see me all her life.'
I yelled at myself cause, I wasn’t able to recognize their love.
Nor did I listen to their advice.
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